Flags atop this Earth
I claim the edge as mine.
Should it be your will to exploit
The toll to pass is fine...
You have not strength enough,
Although greater it becomes
When it thinks that they will grieve.
Be assured, they will grieve.
But, in your rotting cowardice,
Despite those boastful thoughts,
Your world you can not leave behind
And they'll love you all the same
I'll love you all my days-
Don't you see?
I will love you all of my days.
pseudo on Feb 10, 2010, 9:18 am
personally I like the first stanza--great (if slightly mixed) metaphor
Nicholas Seron on Feb 9, 2010, 4:53 pm
You have my thanks; I'm honored. ^^
Bejn Jonathon Xander on Feb 9, 2010, 11:41 am
Powerful words, that last stanza.