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- Midnight Flower
Longing to break, crack, blossom and fall
Open myself to the feeling of all
The falling completely into the bliss
As I hover, so gently, the edges of this
A midnight so huge where my mind use to be
A night of forever, impossible dreams
Asking too much of existence, I call
Longing to break, crack, blossom and fall.
sisterjulia on Jan 9, 2010, 6:55 pm
It's been a good couple of weeks to be sure! Thank you Mr Vincent ()
Vincent on Jan 9, 2010, 6:53 pm
great message wrapped in beautiful flowing verse...
sisterjulia on Jan 6, 2010, 1:19 pm
Thank you Pete, I love it when a rhythm comes together!
sisterjulia on Jan 6, 2010, 1:18 pm
Now that's a poetic comment! Thank you gracious Juni
juniperlillie on Jan 6, 2010, 11:35 am
A circle completed and a life depleted I know this feeling and it leaves me reeling In hope and in love and in acceptance of life In despair and in light I understand the strife of Impossible dreams bursting at the seams Beautiful work Julia. I love it... completely!
Pete Hood on Jan 5, 2010, 6:24 am
Great poem with a nice tight rhythm that augments the message,