Bejn Jonathon Xander on Jan 18, 2010, 1:12 pm

Love the last line!

sisterjulia on Jan 18, 2010, 10:23 am

Thank you Pete

sisterjulia on Jan 18, 2010, 10:22 am

I think moments resurface if we need to more fully allow ourselves the experience (sometimes difficult in the moment itself) or when we can grow from them again...today is one of the latter

sisterjulia on Jan 18, 2010, 10:20 am

Thank you Edro

sisterjulia on Jan 18, 2010, 10:12 am

Thanks marshman! I did contemplate another section, but the memory was in here alread.

Pete Hood on Jan 18, 2010, 9:25 am

Yes, straight to the point with the rhyme at the end giving extra punch.

juniperlillie on Jan 18, 2010, 8:59 am

Often times these moments are so easy to crawl right back into. Slipping back in time and avoiding reality after all. Other times when you want to you almost can't get back there, you can't slip past the ticking clock and remember the beauty of a moment as if you are in that moment all over again. Ahhhh.... I love this one!

Edro on Jan 17, 2010, 8:10 pm

I've read this a couple of times today. Sweet - in a totally non saccharine way.

Marshman on Jan 17, 2010, 6:07 pm

this one gets to where it is going in a hurry and really packs a punch, Sis....well done! Great line breaks.